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[Commission] Asriel by JanainaArt [Commission] Asriel :iconjanainaart:JanainaArt 1,196 63 ID by Sarqq ID :iconsarqq:Sarqq 48 18 man by RobertFremer man :iconrobertfremer:RobertFremer 63 2 Hotel romance by photoport
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Archangel Gabriel, The Golden Herald by PeteMohrbacher Archangel Gabriel, The Golden Herald :iconpetemohrbacher:PeteMohrbacher 4,098 99 Poledance Dragon by drachenmagier Poledance Dragon :icondrachenmagier:drachenmagier 1,124 101 Original 11 by Vanessa-Retake Original 11 :iconvanessa-retake:Vanessa-Retake 563 17 Sven III by Hart-Worx Sven III :iconhart-worx:Hart-Worx 130 4 Arina by photoport
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Kill la Kill  satsuki danpatsu by ta-ku-zou Kill la Kill satsuki danpatsu :iconta-ku-zou:ta-ku-zou 321 11 passive direction by AurimasValevicius
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OVERALL: An essay in femininity: wide hips, narrow waist, long hair, 'nesting', and 'playing hard to get' (looking away). VISION: 4.0. ...


OVERALL: This is an excellently 'dry' and comfortable image. The model is clean and dry, the clothes are likewise. The chair, with its ...


OVERALL: A fun image. The notion of showing modeling from the model's viewpoint feels like insight and makes the viewer an insider: a g...


OVERALL: This image does well to convey a concept (a galaxy within a person) and remain accessible (pleasant to look at). VISION: 5.0. ...

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OVERALL: An essay in femininity: wide hips, narrow waist, long hair, 'nesting', and 'playing hard to get' (looking away).
VISION: 4.0. Great combination (as above) of soft (nesting) elements: cloth, pillow, converted (into a bed) seat, food, and drink.
ORIGINALITY: 3.5. The 'Railway romance' series is a great idea. This captures the sensuality of the concept.
TECHNIQUE: 4.5. Exposure, composition, posing, and so on are all excellent.
IMPACT: 3.0. This is about being nestled, not impact. Still, the extreme difference between the model's waist and hips and the rich hair draw the eye.
NOTES: Great model: really narrow waist and great hair. This has an après feel: the attention has turned to out (through) the window (in that sense it is clean and tidy), in other words, is sated, comfortable, and looking for adventure.
OVERALL: This is an excellently 'dry' and comfortable image. The model is clean and dry, the clothes are likewise. The chair, with its slipcover is also. It is pleasant in this way. A second theme here is loose comfort. The chair and pose of the model convey this.
VISION: 4.5. Many qualities come together to produce a silky image: hair color and style of the model, clean and dry model, pale (soft) pink chemise, loose slipcover on the chair, white (clean) (high T) white balance. To help the loose comfort of the image a capture that has loose, rather than tight, clothes would be even better. Also, there is a lot of visual clutter in the background (in the mirror) (but not you!): arranging a more calming, looser, more comfortable background would help.
ORIGINALITY: 3.0. Kudos to you for making a 'clean and comfortable' themed image.
TECHNIQUE: 4.0. The reduced range of values (of the model) serve to further the 'dry'ness. Well done. A faster shutter speed would have reduced the motion blur of her left hand and arm.
IMPACT: 3.0. This is not an 'in your face' image so it has less impact than a bold image. On the other hand, its smooth, silky look is subtle and takes time to appreciate.
NOTES: Could there be any reason you did *not* PS the streak on the pink cloth?
OVERALL: A fun image. The notion of showing modeling from the model's viewpoint feels like insight and makes the viewer an insider: a great idea (à la 'dazzling Natali' and 'Heavenly Boat'). This is a refreshing change from the usual: align model, camera, and photographer and then 'get creative'. The turn-about is also surprising: it looks like implied nudity (that side being toward the photographers) but it's actually very much a nude.
VISION: 5.0. A great idea in the concept of this image. The three ways the model is being displayed: facing a battery of photographers, under bright (revealing) lights, and raised on a pedestal reveal a statement: 'a model is a person exposed to observation and elevated above other people.
ORIGINALITY: 5.0. Showing a photo session from the model's viewpoint is a great idea.
TECHNIQUE: 4.5. The textures are clear, tones range from near white to near black, the subject stands out from the background, and so on. Excellent. Even the hot (burns out the model's hair) lighting helps to convey the notion of a person under close scrutiny (the role and profession of a model).
IMPACT: 4.5. The model stands out (pops) from the background and has a pleasing, classical pose.
NOTES: As a photo the model is excellently lit and the background is a bit dark. On the other hand the overall result is more dramatic: it looks like an ordinary photo until the background is noticed. Excellent.
OVERALL: This image does well to convey a concept (a galaxy within a person) and remain accessible (pleasant to look at).
VISION: 5.0. This shows a great concept that is hard to convey and does it well.
ORIGINALITY: 4.5. This conveys a subtle concept and is a great implementation of it.
TECHNIQUE: 4.5. The high amount of contrast here is acceptable but the harsh lighting on the forehead (and face) is distracting.
IMPACT: 3.5. The sienna and cyan colors are dramatic but this image does not intend to have impact and has thoughtful concept expressed through it instead.
NOTES: The idea (concept) of: the galaxy (as in a galaxy of possibilities) lies within the person (model), as it (or they) does within each of us is an interesting one. That there is hiding gong on here (the galaxy is hidden except where the hiding skin has been torn away and wisps of hair cover the face (especially the other eye (her right one))) is also interesting. Within the familiar is the exotic. A wonderful and beautiful notion. (There is also the concept that the galaxy (and Universe) is within each of us because we are the intelligence that is aware of it.)
OVERALL: This is so cute! ... and they're *rats*. Kudos to you for using a real species of plant. Your commissioner was wise to engage you for this.
VISION: 3.5. The rats are great and holding paws is fun. But why are they floating in air?
ORIGINALITY: 5.0. This is a unique combination and it is fun to look at.
TECHNIQUE: 5.0. The drawing and watercolor technique are excellent.
IMPACT: 4.0. It's clean, cool, and fresh-looking.
NOTES: The poses and anatomy are splendid, their faces convey contentedness, affection, and adventure, and they have much liveliness. I wonder, though, taking shelter from the rain?

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3wyl Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
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bigskystudio Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2015   Photographer
thanks very much for the add
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red-creations Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014
Thank you very much for the Added to my devWatch!   
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ThierryCravatte Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey, Rob, thank you very much for adding me to your watch list, I really appreciate your interest for my work !
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Conlaodh Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Many thanks for the watch!
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KimiSchaller Featured By Owner Oct 28, 2014
Thank you for watching!
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deskridge Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014   Digital Artist
Thanks for the :+devwatch:!
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UncleOrg Featured By Owner Oct 26, 2014
You're most welcome. I like your use of rendering software: it widens the use of 3D.
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Odilicious Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the watch!:)
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BastianGV Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014
Gratefully thank You for adding me to your deviantWATCH.
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